Tutor.com Literary Analysis Session

Sep. 13, 2013

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Session Transcript - English - Writing Center, 9/4/2013 7:01PM - Tutor.comSession Date: 9/4/2013 7:01PM
Length: 8.8 minute(s)
Subject: English - Writing Center


System Message
[00:00:00] *** Please note: All sessions are recorded for quality control. ***

Guest (Customer)
[00:00:00] read essay in the link then proofread my summary and analysis
[00:00:09] hi

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:00:21] Hi and welcome!

Guest (Customer)
[00:00:54] File Shared > http.docx

System Message
[00:00:55] *** Downloading file from Guest (Customer)... ***

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:01:16] Please send me your essay. Just to let you know, my computer opens docs in Wordpad, so I can't insert notes, but I can highlight text and discuss with you. Is that ok?

Guest (Customer)
[00:01:26] ok

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:05:09] Grammatically, the only thing is would say is to rephrase that last sentence.
[00:05:24] 'it is faith that defines....'
[00:05:40] ',faith is not something...'

Guest (Customer)
[00:05:44] ok
[00:06:12] does antyhing contradict with each other
[00:06:13] ?

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:06:18] what guidelines were you given for this assignment? A length requirement?
[00:06:32] Sorry, just reread the top.
[00:07:02] I don't see any contradictions.

Guest (Customer)
[00:07:13] none
[00:07:14] ok

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:07:20] What do you think about the fact that he mentions so many smelly, unattractive, different people on the train?

Guest (Customer)
[00:07:30] did you read the essay in the link

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:07:33] Why does he describe his fellow passengers that way?

Guest (Customer)
[00:07:33] im ntos ure why

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:07:35] I did.

Guest (Customer)
[00:07:55] to show that they are differnet

Katie B (Tutor)
[00:07:59] Why aren't there attractive, friendly people on the train?

Guest (Customer)
[00:08:15] they dont have faith